I am a Year 6 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
I like you poem Ashton. It was a great idea using being rough in water as your main theme. The use of choppy water as a background works well. Did you remember to check all you punctuation, especially capital letters before Publishing?
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or Ask a question you want to know more about
I like you poem Ashton. It was a great idea using being rough in water as your main theme. The use of choppy water as a background works well. Did you remember to check all you punctuation, especially capital letters before Publishing?
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