My poetry response.

I am learning to pull apart a poem and recognize poetic devices.

What do you think I should improve on.

This is the poem I based my poetry response on.

What the heck are poems well what i know now.

YO YO steps to step up.

   

We have been learning to recognize a quality blog comment and give reasons for our thinking.

We have learned this skill to identify the good and bad aspects of blog comments.

It was fun learning new things with friends. What do you guys I should improve on?

  

My questions

Where in the world is carmen sandieago.( by the way i think you should watch the series before wacthing this.)

Familys favourite season.( almost all the family because dads at work and babby cant talk yet.)

Mums favourite season is summer because it's nice sunny.

little brothers favourite season is autumn because it looks cool when the leaves fall.

My favourite season is winter because it nice and cold it snows sometimes and it makes you feel relaxed and warm inside because you mostly spend time in winter with your family.

So so so so so so so so so cold.

Yawn ‘good morning everybody wh wh why is it so cold you know what I'm going to do on the heater wait why is still cold’ opens the window.‘It's literally colder than Antarctica’. Opens closet takes puffer jacket gloves beanie and thermal. Ah, that's better. But I'm not going outside, man it's cold let's watch some tv let's see what it's really that cold. Jeez, I'm not leaving the house.

Fiji.(WLJ activitie 3)

Why is it so hot in winter.(WLJ activitie 2)

I am wearing my school polar

Fleece and on top of that I'm also

Wearing a jacket over that than my

Blue puffer and on top of that I'm

Wearing a black puffer jacket. 

"Winter learning journey activitie 1".

Matariki.