I am a Year 6 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Kia Ora, Ashton Hi Ashton I really like your slide, it has lots of information and the background is really nice and the background reminds me of my big brother because he used to do that background and maybe next time you could have more information about being a pilot and at the end of the slide maybe you could add pictures of pilots and hope this helps you. Bye bye from Bea
hi... I like your choice of what you want to be when you grow up. I also really like the way you included your family in why you want to be a pilot. Maybe try to NOT copy something off google onto your slide. Bye. Savanah.
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Kia Ora, Ashton
ReplyDeleteHi Ashton I really like your slide, it has lots of information and the background is really nice and the background reminds me of my big brother because he used to do that background and maybe next time you could have more information about being a pilot and at the end of the slide maybe you could add pictures of pilots and hope this helps you.
Bye bye from Bea
hi... I like your choice of what you want to be when you grow up. I also really like the way you included your family in why you want to be a pilot. Maybe try to NOT copy something off google onto your slide.
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Savanah.
cool cool
ReplyDeleteKia Ora, Ashton
ReplyDeleteI really liked it so much!! I liked the information you did. The video that you had in there was good.
Well done ! Ashton
ReplyDeletekia ora ashton. i like how you have done all of this. kai pai
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