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Tuesday 12 May 2020

The lightkeeper

The lightkeeper was born in the town was very lonely one day he made a friend they were the best of friends they would play in the fields run around prank people and one when he told his friend to over to his house and play when he arrived his house it was trashed all his money gone see the lightkeeper lived alone with no parents back then there no child services to take to the orphanage. So he cleaned the place up after he cleaned it up he remembered that he asked his friend over he went house he was gone he looked all over town and didn't know he was then he heard his voice a the dock he looked on the boat there was his stuff he realized his former friend had tricked him to be his friend so his actual friends could rob him and half of the town later that night they were caught and prison so he decided to never ever trust anybody or have a friend again.

 THE END

1 comment:

  1. Hi Ashton,
    It's great to see you engaging in the learning activities!!!
    You could include a link to the video clip so that your audience understands that you're writing the prequel for it, to tell how he cam to be the person he is in the video clip. When you are writing, try drafting it in a google doc, so that you can take advantage of the extra tools (Read & Write App, grammerly etc) to fine tune your writing. The Read&Write App will help you learn where the sentences should end (I turned a little blue) You'll hear it the way your reader will read it. We are going to focus on paragraphing when we get back.

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