I am a Year 6 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Hi Ashton, It's great that you found out more about the author. I wonder if you could make your DLO more informative by including some images (perhaps a photo of him, a map of where he was from...) What else can you tell us? What did he write? DId he have a family?
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or Ask a question you want to know more about
Hi Ashton, It's great that you found out more about the author. I wonder if you could make your DLO more informative by including some images (perhaps a photo of him, a map of where he was from...) What else can you tell us? What did he write? DId he have a family?
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