I am a Year 6 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Kia ora Ashton, I really like the way you have written this in your own words. Your questions were really interesting.Next time you could read over what you have written to make sure that it makes sense for your reader. What other muscles are used to make a laugh?
Hi Ashton. I like that how you write these facts in your own word without Copy & Paste. Maybe next time you could add more facts because you only have 5 slides.
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or Ask a question you want to know more about
Kia ora Ashton,
ReplyDeleteI really like the way you have written this in your own words. Your questions were really interesting.Next time you could read over what you have written to make sure that it makes sense for your reader. What other muscles are used to make a laugh?
Hi Ashton.
ReplyDeleteI like that how you write these facts in your own word without Copy & Paste. Maybe next time you could add more facts because you only have 5 slides.