I am a Year 6 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Hi Ashton, You used some great adjectives to describe in your slogan! Well done for adding pictures as well. Is there a spot that should include a full stop or exclamation mark?
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or Ask a question you want to know more about
Hi Ashton,
ReplyDeleteYou used some great adjectives to describe in your slogan! Well done for adding pictures as well. Is there a spot that should include a full stop or exclamation mark?