I am a Year 6 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
hey its chevelle here i loved the way you put the names of reptiles did you think about putting in what they live in next time maybe you could put in where they live ok?
hi aston i loved the front of the slide because you can see a reptiles habert you brought me back to when we did this but i did trutalls next time you could put more words and not make the words big good bye
Yo it's nikau.i like how you are showing what reptiles are and what they do.you taught me a little bit about reptiles and what they do to protect them from other animals.how did you get all the ideas from.
hi ashton its me bea and i like your reptiles and please next time, you could name the drawing and color the sun yellow or orange and it was pretty cool ashton! from:bea
Hey Ashton I like your drawing what you draw was like a sun but next time can you colour the sun yellow or orange or red but nice I can still see it. And the tree looks good and awesome but like it if you would put branches on your tree because some real trees have branches right? and the sun yellow and is that a rock but COOL! From: Raewyn
hi ashton its me connor and i like your reptiles and please next time, you could name the drawing and color the sun yellow or orange and it was pretty cool ashton! from:connor
hi ashton its Kaycee From Ngakaunui I Really liked your reptile Slide Mabey next time, you Could add i bit more Tetalis and Mabey Change the font or Text and it was pretty cool ashton! Blog you Later
Hello i'm Soheilla, your classmate, I really like your reptiles slide. it's amazing. I hope next time you could do more facts. i love reptiles. -Soheilla
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or Ask a question you want to know more about
hey its chevelle here i loved the way you put the names of reptiles did you think about putting in what they live in next time maybe you could put in where they live ok?
ReplyDeleteHey ashton, i really really like the reptile that you draw and it's cool and you have made a lots of interesting word and it's great and i love it bye
ReplyDeletehi aston
ReplyDeletei loved the front of the slide because you can see a reptiles habert
you brought me back to when we did this but i did trutalls
next time you could put more words and not make the words big
good bye
Yo it's nikau.i like how you are showing what reptiles are and what they do.you taught me a little bit about reptiles and what they do to protect them from other animals.how did you get all the ideas from.
ReplyDeletehi ashton its me bea and i like your reptiles and please next time, you could name the drawing and color the sun yellow or orange and it was pretty cool ashton!
ReplyDeletefrom:bea
Hey Ashton I like your drawing what you draw was like a sun but next time can you colour the sun yellow or orange or red but nice I can still see it. And the tree looks good and awesome but like it if you would put branches on your tree because some real trees have branches right? and the sun yellow and is that a rock but COOL!
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hi ashton its me connor and i like your reptiles and please next time, you could name the drawing and color the sun yellow or orange and it was pretty cool ashton!
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hiy it is lexi her i like the one abat reptiles bekos ti is nising to red .
ReplyDeletehi ashton its Kaycee From Ngakaunui I Really liked your reptile Slide Mabey next time, you Could add i bit more Tetalis and Mabey Change the font or Text and it was pretty cool ashton!
ReplyDeleteBlog you Later
hi it is micah do you like your class see ye Bye
ReplyDeletehi I am thomas I like your.Reptiles because of the facts your facts were fun and cool.Next time you should put in a video....?
ReplyDeleteHey there
ReplyDeleteits Daisy that is cool (not) just kidding
Hello i'm Soheilla, your classmate, I really like your reptiles slide. it's amazing. I hope next time you could do more facts. i love reptiles. -Soheilla
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