I am a Year 6 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
What a funny comment. If it smelt super gross, I definitely wouldn’t put it in my mouth. Ew! Nonetheless, ka pai on so accurately matching the expressions you saw on the characters’ faces with the captions you wrote. I also really like how you’ve included the deconstruction of who each character is and what their role in the story is.
Because you’ve written such a great comic strip, I was wondering, if you could write a comic on absolutely anything, what would you write about? I think I’d write about space adventures and rocket ships.
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Kia ora Ashton,
ReplyDeleteWhat a funny comment. If it smelt super gross, I definitely wouldn’t put it in my mouth. Ew! Nonetheless, ka pai on so accurately matching the expressions you saw on the characters’ faces with the captions you wrote. I also really like how you’ve included the deconstruction of who each character is and what their role in the story is.
Because you’ve written such a great comic strip, I was wondering, if you could write a comic on absolutely anything, what would you write about? I think I’d write about space adventures and rocket ships.
Keep up the fantastic work!
Ka kite anō,
Shannon (SLJ)