How do you feel?
How might you move towards the door?
Can you think of better verbs than walked?
I walked across the field towards the door.
Can you improve this sentence by adding a more powerful verb? Can you improve it in any other way?
If I was there id feel amazing and my hopes will be soaring because I actually found it.
I walked across the field towards the door.
I strolled across the field towards the door.
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