I am a Year 6 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Kia ora Ashton, Hi Ashton, I know it's lockdown but I really want to check your blog and I picked this for a reason. This blog is amazing for the student led team and maybe before you submit it to your blog maybe you want to check you writing exactly, not to be rude but your blog is full of amazing Idea. Hope you enjoy your lockdown. - Your classmate Bea
Kia ora Ashton. I would suggest writing in the description part of your form, an explanation about what you are doing. You could also give some examples or options of events. I guess we will get back to this once we are all back at school.
Hi Ashton, looks like this idea got chopped.Reasonably well set out. Maybe we will get to revisit these ideas when we return to school.Hope you and your family are well.Stay awesome and be kind.
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or Ask a question you want to know more about
Kia ora Ashton,
ReplyDeleteHi Ashton, I know it's lockdown but I really want to check your blog and I picked this for a reason. This blog is amazing for the student led team and maybe before you submit it to your blog maybe you want to check you writing exactly, not to be rude but your blog is full of amazing Idea.
Hope you enjoy your lockdown.
- Your classmate Bea
Kia ora Ashton.
ReplyDeleteI would suggest writing in the description part of your form, an explanation about what you are doing. You could also give some examples or options of events.
I guess we will get back to this once we are all back at school.
Hi Ashton, looks like this idea got chopped.Reasonably well set out. Maybe we will get to revisit these ideas when we return to school.Hope you and your family are well.Stay awesome and be kind.
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