I am a Year 6 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Today we were told to do a DLO on Matariki. For the DLO I did a site and a canvas. the hardest thing that came my way was actually looking for the information because other people have different beliefs on Matariki.
Bula Vinaka, This is an awesome site because you have told us about some of the Matariki Stars. You also embedded a Canva on your site too. I was disappointed to see that you forgot my favourite stars... Next time, you should make your blog post more interesting (& effective) by taking a screenshot of your site and putting it in the post (DLO).You could also make links to more information. How did you make the Canva slide? Maybe you could write a post that teaches others to use it.
Kia ora Ashton I like how you have started to create a site. Will you be adding to it in the future? Some of the information looks very similar to another site I have seen.
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or Ask a question you want to know more about
Bula Vinaka,
ReplyDeleteThis is an awesome site because you have told us about some of the Matariki Stars. You also embedded a Canva on your site too.
I was disappointed to see that you forgot my favourite stars...
Next time, you should make your blog post more interesting (& effective) by taking a screenshot of your site and putting it in the post (DLO).You could also make links to more information.
How did you make the Canva slide? Maybe you could write a post that teaches others to use it.
cool Ashton great work
ReplyDeleteKia ora Ashton
ReplyDeleteI like how you have started to create a site. Will you be adding to it in the future? Some of the information looks very similar to another site I have seen.