I am a Year 6 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Kia orana Ashton. How exciting that you have started learning about poetry in your Literacy class. You seem to have a good understanding of what poetry is. I think you will enjoy learning about different types of poems and will probably really enjoy adding awesome alliteration and adjectives.
Kia ora Ashton, this is Raewyn. I love how you add some of what you only know about Poetry. Next time you could not put "What the heck" in your title for your blog post, and change the I into capital. Blog you later bye!
Kia ora ashton its Nikau.You have got a lot of things of what you think poetry is and you explain it really well.Next time could you please make the text bigger because I cant really see the text that well.
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Kia orana Ashton.
ReplyDeleteHow exciting that you have started learning about poetry in your Literacy class. You seem to have a good understanding of what poetry is. I think you will enjoy learning about different types of poems and will probably really enjoy adding awesome alliteration and adjectives.
Kia ora Ashton, this is Raewyn.
ReplyDeleteI love how you add some of what you only know about Poetry.
Next time you could not put "What the heck" in your title for your blog post, and change the I into capital.
Blog you later bye!
Kia ora ashton its Nikau.You have got a lot of things of what you think poetry is and you explain it really well.Next time could you please make the text bigger because I cant really see the text that well.
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