I am a Year 6 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Hi Ashton, I wonder how you would overcome the problems of water pressure at that depth, no light, getting to the city and back to the surface. I would love to see you include an advertisement to attract people to come and live in your new city. What are the advantages of living underwater?
Bula Ashton. I like the way you you drew an underwater city. I can completely understand when it says "For The Chosen One". Try adding some information you know about Atlantis, how it sank and theories. How long did it take you? Was this in your spare time or did your teacher tell you to do it?
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Hi Ashton, I wonder how you would overcome the problems of water pressure at that depth, no light, getting to the city and back to the surface.
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Bula Ashton. I like the way you you drew an underwater city. I can completely understand when it says "For The Chosen One". Try adding some information you know about Atlantis, how it sank and theories. How long did it take you? Was this in your spare time or did your teacher tell you to do it?
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